Quick update, heres some of the new animatic frames that im doing today, were also going to record voices on wednesday!

Christmas update

Alot has happened over christmas.

I got some expression sheets and construction sheets done for the characters, just to help with animation (the best bit!)

And heres some expression sheets for the character Scorch

The goal was to create an animatic of the entire short. I managed to do only one scene being informed from the script.

After a review with my tutor we came to the conclusion that there was far to much dialogue in the animatic, not enough was being told in terms of visual humour and there was far too much "spoon feeding" of information. And also to keep consistency within the characters was an initial problem.

So Right now im changing the script to bring in more action based humour so that the balance is met.